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    Graey Clan [REDUXED]

    Shimiko Chinoike
    Shimiko Chinoike



    Village : Kumogakure
    Rank : Jounin
    Clan : Chinoike

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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike Wed Apr 01, 2020 8:20 pm

    [center]Graey Clan [REDUXED] Latest?cb=20101101203629

    Græy Family
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    Advanced Element: [Radiation Release]
    Græy

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    [justify]Clan History/Description
    The origin of the Græy Family is one shrouded in mystery. Some say they descended from an ancient savage kingdom of subjugators, while others contest that their dreadful abilities suggest they must be direct offsprings of the devil. Still others claim that they are nothing more than a family of assassins created from the harsh conditions of their prior existence and standards of living. The most logical lore however, claims that the Græy family were one of the first settlers in the modern day industrial country known as Amegakure. The earliest written record of the Græys was sometime in 400 A.S just before the invasion of the Uchiha held Land of Fire by the Tetsudashi, and so it is generally thought that the original Græy Family existed at that time. Although their origins point to Amegakure, that theory remains baseless and can easily be refuted. Questions remain unanswered about how exactly the Græys came to settle in Amegakure.

    In the year 132 A.S. the last disciple, Hihoni of the Fire passed away, prompting the independence march of multiple clans of which the Græy were included. Prior to this event, they lived in subjugation under the vast Kazehana Empire. With the struggle for dominance that ensued during the preceding years, the Græys, armed only with common weapons, were no match for clans with superior kekkei genkais. Thus, in the year 351 A.S., they were defeated and forced to flee into the uninhabited Land of Rain. There they remained for the next 50 years, growing in number. It is at this point in time that the written record of the Græys started. It makes mention of the then family head as "a gravely disturbed man who practiced the dark arts of alchemy and dabbled in the dern and forbidden teachings of necromancy with his family". The record further expands on how this man and his family were hated by other Græys due to their curious nature, leading to their seclusion before they were finally ousted. With warfare brewing around the Land of Rain, the man and his family had nowhere to flee to. As a final resort, the man would go ahead to suggest that he and his family take their own lives rather than be killed off by the advancing Tetsudashi army. He was confident that there would be a better life for him and his family after this first death; he believed in a higher plain of existence.

    To carry out this suicide, he retrieved a mysterious green glowing crystal which he had found during one of his many voyages. He had initially named it the Philosopher's Stone (in actuality, it was an extremely radioactive crystalline material of unknown origins). He pulverized it and together with his family, snorted it all before going to bed in hopes that they would never again awaken to their pitiful lives. Fortunately for him and his wife, they did not awaken. Unfortunately for their twin son and daughter, they awoken to find their skins aglow with the same green color of the Philosopher's Stone. They had undergone a genetic mutation that made them immune to the radiation from the crystal. Still though, their hideous greenish looks caused the rest of their tribe to attack them in order to put an end to the accursed family once and for all. However, the other Græys discovered that when ever people tried to get close to the twins, they would simply fall down and die or become extremely ill or turn into grotesque creatures riddled with unhuman mutations and they were thrown into a state of panic and confusion. Realizing their new found powers, the twins went on a rampage, killing off every last one of their kin until they were the only ones left. All alone the twins began fending for themselves in the land. They began to learn how to control and use the new power they received from the crystal strategically until they gained perfect control over it. Years went by as the twins continued to mature together and grew extremely fond of and attached to each other. Eventually, they began to copulate and began bearing offspring of their own, thus pioneering the rebirth of the Græy Family. They were dubbed "The Founding Twins", and all their offspring innately had the same ability that they had and so did their own offsprings until the power became known as the Græy bloodline; a mysterious advanced element known today as Radiation Release.

    Clan/Bloodline Traits & Characteristics

    Græys usually have an intimidating sinister presence about them. Most may have pitch black hair with green irises. However, variations may arise from time to time. They all gain a full tier boost to Constitution when taking damage from Ninjutsu at the cost of 750 EXP. That is, if they have C in Constitution it now becomes B whenever they are facing all forms of ninjutsu. This can be gotten in increments of 250 EXP.
    250 EXP for '+'
    500 EXP for '++'
    750 EXP for '1 Tier'


    Radiation Release: Energy Form
    To gain access to Radiation Release in its energy form, the user will pay 500 EXP.

    Radiation Release: Solid/Semisolid Form
    To gain access to Radiation Release in its solid/semisolid form, the user will pay 500 EXP.

    Bloodline Description & Abilities

    Spoiler:

    Bloodline Limits & Drawbacks

    If the Græy Family member shows some restraint in the use of their Radiation Release techniques during battle, they can fight alongside allies. However, if they choose to go all out in battle, they have to consider the fact that they may end up poisoning their own allies as well. This is one major drawback which may cause them to be sent on solo missions more often or to have to fight multiple enemies without help from their own allies except these allies are Græys as well.

    If one is able to completely destroy a Radiation technique in the same turn/post in which it is created, they do not suffer from any of it's effects (bother Health and Stat based).

    Clan Bloodline Techniques


    NOTES
    - Removed all stat debuffs granted by this Clan
    Chigetsu
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    Rank : Genin
    Clan : Hōzuki
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    Graey Clan [REDUXED] Empty Re: Graey Clan [REDUXED]

    Post by Chigetsu Wed Apr 08, 2020 1:38 am

    Shimiko Chinoike wrote:[center]Graey Clan [REDUXED] Latest?cb=20101101203629

    Græy Family
    Unaffiliated
    Advanced Element: [Radiation Release]
    Græy

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    [justify]Clan History/Description
    The origin of the Græy Family is one shrouded in mystery. Some say they descended from an ancient savage kingdom of subjugators, while others contest that their dreadful abilities suggest they must be direct offsprings of the devil. Still others claim that they are nothing more than a family of assassins created from the harsh conditions of their prior existence and standards of living. The most logical lore however, claims that the Græy family were one of the first settlers in the modern day industrial country known as Amegakure. The earliest written record of the Græys was sometime in 400 A.S just before the invasion of the Uchiha held Land of Fire by the Tetsudashi, and so it is generally thought that the original Græy Family existed at that time. Although their origins point to Amegakure, that theory remains baseless and can easily be refuted. Questions remain unanswered about how exactly the Græys came to settle in Amegakure.

    In the year 132 A.S. the last disciple, Hihoni of the Fire passed away, prompting the independence march of multiple clans of which the Græy were included. Prior to this event, they lived in subjugation under the vast Kazehana Empire. With the struggle for dominance that ensued during the preceding years, the Græys, armed only with common weapons, were no match for clans with superior kekkei genkais. Thus, in the year 351 A.S., they were defeated and forced to flee into the uninhabited Land of Rain. There they remained for the next 50 years, growing in number. It is at this point in time that the written record of the Græys started. It makes mention of the then family head as "a gravely disturbed man who practiced the dark arts of alchemy and dabbled in the dern and forbidden teachings of necromancy with his family". The record further expands on how this man and his family were hated by other Græys due to their curious nature, leading to their seclusion before they were finally ousted. With warfare brewing around the Land of Rain, the man and his family had nowhere to flee to. As a final resort, the man would go ahead to suggest that he and his family take their own lives rather than be killed off by the advancing Tetsudashi army. He was confident that there would be a better life for him and his family after this first death; he believed in a higher plain of existence.

    To carry out this suicide, he retrieved a mysterious green glowing crystal which he had found during one of his many voyages. He had initially named it the Philosopher's Stone (in actuality, it was an extremely radioactive crystalline material of unknown origins). He pulverized it and together with his family, snorted it all before going to bed in hopes that they would never again awaken to their pitiful lives. Fortunately for him and his wife, they did not awaken. Unfortunately for their twin son and daughter, they awoken to find their skins aglow with the same green color of the Philosopher's Stone. They had undergone a genetic mutation that made them immune to the radiation from the crystal. Still though, their hideous greenish looks caused the rest of their tribe to attack them in order to put an end to the accursed family once and for all. However, the other Græys discovered that when ever people tried to get close to the twins, they would simply fall down and die or become extremely ill or turn into grotesque creatures riddled with unhuman mutations and they were thrown into a state of panic and confusion. Realizing their new found powers, the twins went on a rampage, killing off every last one of their kin until they were the only ones left. All alone the twins began fending for themselves in the land. They began to learn how to control and use the new power they received from the crystal strategically until they gained perfect control over it. Years went by as the twins continued to mature together and grew extremely fond of and attached to each other. Eventually, they began to copulate and began bearing offspring of their own, thus pioneering the rebirth of the Græy Family. They were dubbed "The Founding Twins", and all their offspring innately had the same ability that they had and so did their own offsprings until the power became known as the Græy bloodline; a mysterious advanced element known today as Radiation Release.

    Clan/Bloodline Traits & Characteristics

    Græys usually have an intimidating sinister presence about them. Most may have pitch black hair with green irises. However, variations may arise from time to time. They all gain a full tier boost to Constitution when taking damage from Ninjutsu at the cost of 750 EXP. That is, if they have C in Constitution it now becomes B whenever they are facing all forms of ninjutsu. This can be gotten in increments of 250 EXP.
    250 EXP for '+'
    500 EXP for '++'
    750 EXP for '1 Tier'


    Radiation Release: Energy Form
    To gain access to Radiation Release in its energy form, the user will pay 500 EXP.

    Radiation Release: Solid/Semisolid Form
    To gain access to Radiation Release in its solid/semisolid form, the user will pay 500 EXP.

    Bloodline Description & Abilities

    Spoiler:

    Bloodline Limits & Drawbacks

    If the Græy Family member shows some restraint in the use of their Radiation Release techniques during battle, they can fight alongside allies. However, if they choose to go all out in battle, they have to consider the fact that they may end up poisoning their own allies as well. This is one major drawback which may cause them to be sent on solo missions more often or to have to fight multiple enemies without help from their own allies except these allies are Græys as well.

    If one is able to completely destroy a Radiation technique in the same turn/post in which it is created, they do not suffer from any of it's effects (bother Health and Stat based).

    Clan Bloodline Techniques


    NOTES
    - Removed all stat debuffs granted by this Clan

    Radiation Clan adjustments
    1: Increase the EXP cost. Currently this is too cheap. Bumping it up to 1250 EXP would be appropriate.
    2: Remove the Solid/Semi-Solid forms. This makes no sense for an element to be able to create solid constructs like "buildings" when it's made of three non solid elements and is radiation, which just doesn't logically make sense.
    3: Remove the Tier to Constitution boost. Few other advanced elements get a tier booster like this.
    4: "Radiation can have positive effects when one is affected in small doses but as it increases in strength it becomes lethal." Remove this. Radiation can't be used for healing or to have positive effects like this would imply. Even chemotherapy, the only arguable case of this, is effectively just poisoning your body and hoping the cancer dies first.
    5: Make the passive lasting damage that's a bonus of this last only up to a maximum of two rounds.
    6: Stat debuffs may be allowed, but those and health effects must follow poison rules.
    7: The current drawbacks are irrelevant. A drawback that including the user being susceptible to Radiation's passive effects was thought to be appropriate by staff.

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