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    Yurei Clan Redux

    Kubi Tsuru
    Kubi Tsuru



    Village : Kumogakure
    Rank : Jounin
    Clan : Clanless

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    Post by Kubi Tsuru Wed Mar 17, 2021 8:48 am

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    Yurei
    Unaffiliated
    Dojutsu: Akayurei
    Clan Leader: Naito Yurei

    Clan History/Description Once upon a time, a long time ago, in the age of myth, the Yurei clan developed. Men and women of terrifyingly effective visual prowess, defying logic and sanity with scarily effective assassinations. Their visual abilities were so feared at this time, they were rumored to be able to read the very mind of the unfortunate soul that earned their ire. Soon, their reputation caught up with them, and they were driven out by those who feared them, eventually leaving Lightning Country altogether. They wouldn’t return for many, many years.

    Over time, they lost much, but most of all they lost the size they once had. Once, they rivaled the most numerous clan, but as they wandered and intermarried, the Yurei began to dwindle, eventually only a few dozen remaining. Their power dwindled as well, their knowledge and most powerful techniques being but a mystery. Though they still remain quite the powerful force to be reckoned with, much of their glory has faded into ruin.

    Now leaderless, they wander the outskirts of many countries but belonging to none.

    Clan/Bloodline Traits & Characteristics: Several things bind the few members of the Yurei together, that mark them as part of this distinctive clan. The most notable, perhaps, are the discolorations of their eyes and hair. Unlike most of their kin tend to be, the Yurei possess bright violet eyes, so much so that they tend to almost glow in the dark. Their hair, as well, tends towards violet colors, though unlike the unchanging shade of their eyes, can vary between light shades of lavender to purples so dark they’re almost black. All pure-blooded Yurei possess these traits, while those mixed with other bloodlines possess at least one. It has become somewhat of a calling card among the family, how others among the clan know each other at a distance.

    In addition to the violet colorations, the Yurei clan possess a petite, seemingly sickly frame. Pale of skin and small of stature, they are oft mistaken for someone stricken with a deathly illness. Despite this apparent weakness, however, they possess no such faults.

    Bloodline Description & Abilities: In myth, the yurei are ruined souls, rent from their body to never see nirvana; departed and corrupted spirits to which physical boundaries mean very little. It is unclear if the Yurei clan or this myth developed first, but regardless of the origin, it is an apt theme. The abilities of the Yurei mimic the mythological creature they’re named after, their supernatural ability to peer through space, heedless of any barriers in the way, glowing red eyes burning with emotion. As their Dojutsu develops and their skill with it advances, the Yurei can cast powerful Genjutsu, see the chakra flow of all living things, project their full senses forward, and even determine if a person is close to death. Despite its ancient bloodline, the dangerous occupation of the Yurei oft means the ninja  rarely have time to develop it. The potential power of this bloodline is still undiscovered.

    Akayusei: Stage One: 500 EXP
    lit. Red Ghost
    The first stage of this Dojutsu, there are several benefits to the Akayusei at this level, even though it has not yet achieved its full potential. First and foremost, the Yurei gains the ability to passively see the chakra levels of individuals he or she looks at. While the method this is done varies between Clan members, it is typically an aura around the individual, with a larger aura indicating a more powerful aura. At this level, the Yurei cannot determine exact levels of chakra. The eyes of the Yurei are also extremely analytical. While Akayurei Stage One is active, the Yurei Clan member gets a passive “+” to Perception, while also gaining the ability to use ”Yurei Shiryoku”.

    While activated, the Yurei possess glowing, bright red eyes, replacing the color of their pupil and iris. While typically a soft glow, at times of intense emotions, it can glow to reflect those, growing brighter or even leaving a flame-like trail. While activated, the Yurei clan member loses “.5 CP” per post.

    Akayurei: Stage Two: 500 EXP
    The penultimate advancement for this Dojutsu, and the stage at which most Yurei achieve sometime in their life. Training and experience has improved their sensory abilities quite a bit. The Yurei can now pinpoint exact levels of Chakra in living things they can see, an instinctive knowledge that is achieved simply by looking at an individual. Their analytical abilities have greatly increased as well. Simply by looking at a group, be it people, a pile of money, or trees in a forest, the Yurei will gain instinctive knowledge of the amount of objects within said groups; even with numerous groups of various types, the Yurei does not become overwhelmed by the information. Additionally, the Yurei Clan member gains a passive “++” to Perception. They gain access to a wider range of their clan abilities; “Akai Hekikai Technique”,”Chakura Yurei”,  and “Yurei Shiryoku: Sakasame Ni”.

    The red in the eyes is more pronounced now, even glowing red. Its almost a liquid, viscous form, roiling and pitching with the emotion of the member. When activated, the Yurei clan member loses. “.5 CP’ per post.

    Akayurei Zentai 500 EXP
    lit. Red Ghost Ultimate
    The final stage for any Yurei to achieve, the ultimate ability for any member of the Clan. Their training, their experience, and ultimately, their experiences have culminated to activate Akayurei Zentai. Yurei with this level of Dojustu have the passive ability to see the exact amount of life any individual may have, determined by a red aura around the individual. Their sensory abilities are so enhanced that, by this point, the Yurei can detect subtle changes in an individuals chakra flow and body features to determine even small things, such as lying or movements; some akin this to mind-reading. In terms of precognition, and determining movements, lies, or an opponent's jutsu, the Yurei with Akayurei Zentai is considered to have 1 tier higher in Intelligence. Their analytical abilities are increased astronomically as well, gaining a 1 tier boost to Perception that replaces previous boosts. Finally, the Yurei can learn the ultimate Jutsu of their clan; “Yurei Shiryoku: Zettai Kankaku”.

    The red is much more pronounced than the first two levels, filling their entire iris and covering their vision with a red, heatless flame.This flame is purely aesthetic and can take on many forms, from a streak of red across their eyes to a circular disc, to even appearing like make-up covering the eyelids. While activated, the Yurei clan member loses “1 CP” per post.

    Bloodline Limits & Drawbacks: Like all Dojutsu, the Akayurei possesses its fair share of weaknesses. In addition to the specific weaknesses that the jutsus bring, the eye itself has faults as well. The jutsu themselves, unless otherwise stated, can only be used one at a time. Additionally, most of the Jutsu require concentration that can be interrupted by taking damage or other things that can cause damage. Akayurei Jutsu and abilities affect allies and enemies alike.

    Clan Techniques
    Yurei Shiryoku:

    Akai Hekikai:

    Chakura Yurei:
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    Last edited by Kubi Tsuru on Fri Mar 19, 2021 8:16 am; edited 3 times in total
    Chigetsu
    Chigetsu



    Village : Kirigakure
    Rank : Genin
    Clan : Hōzuki
    Discord Tag : Lithium#2476

    Yurei Clan Redux Empty Re: Yurei Clan Redux

    Post by Chigetsu Thu Mar 18, 2021 7:23 pm

    Kubi Tsuru wrote:
    Yurei Clan Redux Eye-logo-monogram-creative-design-mockup-black-and-white-simple-media-vector-id648452808?k=6&m=648452808&s=170667a&w=0&h=2YpWkoieP9YdRpfYzftHT1HgJj75QSH_ORnAaI2NRJU=

    Yurei
    Unaffiliated
    Dojutsu: Akayurei
    Clan Leader: Naito Yurei

    Clan History/Description Once upon a time, a long time ago, in the age of myth, the Yurei clan developed. Men and women of terrifyingly effective visual prowess, defying logic and sanity with scarily effective assassinations. Their visual abilities were so feared at this time, they were rumored to be able to read the very mind of the unfortunate soul that earned their ire. Soon, their reputation caught up with them, and they were driven out by those who feared them, eventually leaving Lightning Country altogether. They wouldn’t return for many, many years.

    Over time, they lost much, but most of all they lost the size they once had. Once, they rivaled the most numerous clan, but as they wandered and intermarried, the Yurei began to dwindle, eventually only a few dozen remaining. Their power dwindled as well, their knowledge and most powerful techniques being but a mystery. Though they still remain quite the powerful force to be reckoned with, much of their glory has faded into ruin.

    Now leaderless, they wander the outskirts of many countries but belonging to none.

    Clan/Bloodline Traits & Characteristics: Several things bind the few members of the Yurei together, that mark them as part of this distinctive clan. The most notable, perhaps, are the discolorations of their eyes and hair. Unlike most of their kin tend to be, the Yurei possess bright violet eyes, so much so that they tend to almost glow in the dark. Their hair, as well, tends towards violet colors, though unlike the unchanging shade of their eyes, can vary between light shades of lavender to purples so dark they’re almost black. All pure-blooded Yurei possess these traits, while those mixed with other bloodlines possess at least one. It has become somewhat of a calling card among the family, how others among the clan know each other at a distance.

    In addition to the violet colorations, the Yurei clan possess a petite, seemingly sickly frame. Pale of skin and small of stature, they are oft mistaken for someone stricken with a deathly illness. Despite this apparent weakness, however, they possess no such faults.

    Bloodline Description & Abilities: In myth, the yurei are ruined souls, rent from their body to never see nirvana; departed and corrupted spirits to which physical boundaries mean very little. It is unclear if the Yurei clan or this myth developed first, but regardless of the origin, it is an apt theme. The abilities of the Yurei mimic the mythological creature they’re named after, their supernatural ability to peer through space, heedless of any barriers in the way, glowing red eyes burning with emotion. As their Dojutsu develops and their skill with it advances, the Yurei can cast powerful Genjutsu, see the chakra flow of all living things, project their full senses forward, and even determine if a person is close to death. Despite its ancient bloodline, the dangerous occupation of the Yurei oft means the ninja  rarely have time to develop it. The potential power of this bloodline is still undiscovered.

    Akayusei: Stage One: 500 EXP
    lit. Red Ghost
    The first stage of this Dojutsu, there are several benefits to the Akayusei at this level, even though it has not yet achieved its full potential. First and foremost, the Yurei gains the ability to passively see the chakra levels of individuals he or she looks at. While the method this is done varies between Clan members, it is typically an aura around the individual, with a larger aura indicating a more powerful aura. At this level, the Yurei cannot determine exact levels of chakra. The eyes of the Yurei are also extremely analytical. While Akayurei Stage One is active, the Yurei Clan member gets a passive “+” to Perception, while also gaining the ability to use ”Yurei Shiryoku”.

    While activated, the Yurei possess glowing, bright red eyes, replacing the color of their pupil and iris. While typically a soft glow, at times of intense emotions, it can glow to reflect those, growing brighter or even leaving a flame-like trail.

    Akayurei: Stage Two: 500 EXP
    The penultimate advancement for this Dojutsu, and the stage at which most Yurei achieve sometime in their life. Training and experience has improved their sensory abilities quite a bit. The Yurei can now pinpoint exact levels of Chakra in living things they can see, an instinctive knowledge that is achieved simply by looking at an individual. Their analytical abilities have greatly increased as well. Simply by looking at a group, be it people, a pile of money, or trees in a forest, the Yurei will gain instinctive knowledge of the amount of objects within said groups; even with numerous groups of various types, the Yurei does not become overwhelmed by the information. Additionally, the Yurei Clan member gains a passive “++” to Perception. They gain access to a wider range of their clan abilities; “Akai Hekikai Technique”,”Chakura Yurei”,  and “Yurei Shiryoku: Sakasame Ni”.

    Akayurei Zentai 500 EXP
    lit. Red Ghost Ultimate
    The final stage for any Yurei to achieve, the ultimate ability for any member of the Clan. Their training, their experience, and ultimately, their experiences have culminated to activate Akayurei Zentai. Yurei with this level of Dojustu have the passive ability to see the exact amount of life any individual may have, determined by a red aura around the individual. Their sensory abilities are so enhanced that, by this point, the Yurei can detect subtle changes in an individuals chakra flow and body features to determine even small things, such as lying or movements; some akin this to mind-reading. In terms of precognition, and determining movements, lies, or an opponent's jutsu, the Yurei with Akayurei Zentai is considered to have 1 tier higher in Intelligence. Their analytical abilities are increased astronomically as well, gaining a 1 tier boost to Perception that replaces previous boosts. Finally, the Yurei can learn the ultimate Jutsu of their clan; “Yurei Shiryoku: Zettai Kankaku”.

    Bloodline Limits & Drawbacks: Like all Dojutsu, the Akayurei possesses its fair share of weaknesses. In addition to the specific weaknesses that the jutsus bring, the eye itself has faults as well. The jutsu themselves, unless otherwise stated, can only be used one at a time. Additionally, most of the Jutsu require concentration that can be interrupted by taking damage or other things that can cause damage. Akayurei Jutsu and abilities affect allies and enemies alike.

    Clan Techniques
    Yurei Shiryoku:

    Akihekekai:

    Chakura Yurei:

    Yurei Shiryoku (lit. Ghost Sight)
    While under the effects of Yurei Shiryoku, the clan member can still move their body if needed, but due to the separation and unable to see, they receive a “-2” penalty to Coordination for any movement they make.
    -Specifically state “-2 Tiers” if that’s what you mean. If this isn’t what you mean please clarify.

    While under the effects of Yurei Shiryoku, the Yurei Clan Member is quite vulnerable and cannot use any other jutsu save for certain Sensory techniques.
    -Please clarify what you mean by certain Sensory techniques, are there requirements?

    Yurei Shiryoku: Zettai Kankaku
    At will, the Yurei can cast their vision up to 500 meters in whichever direction they are looking, bypassing any and all defenses or barriers in the way.
    The bolded text here has to be changed. Mundane barriers, such as walls, rock, or etc. are fine to bypass, but specific barriers that would otherwise block sensory, such as those created by fuuinjutsu and state they block sensory, will have to be able to block this as well.

    Also, an additional point of clarification, the area where the Yurei projects their senses to will be able to be picked up on by chakra sensory methods as external. This is true of all applications of sensory projection by this clan.

    Akai Hekikai lit. Red Cleave
    This is being looked at more deeply by staff and will require more time. We'll get back to you when we reach a decision here.

    Chakura Yurei lit. Chakra Ghost
    While using Chakura Yurei, the clan member cannot use any Akayurei techniques, though they do benefit from the clan’s inherent Perception boost.
    This weakness can be removed and is a bit too harsh. The Yurei should still be able to use their techniques and gain their clan abilities during the use of this jutsu.

    Other
    I didn’t see a dojutsu activation cost, which this clan will need. Something along the lines of other similar dojutsu, such as the Sharingan or Byakugan.
    Chigetsu
    Chigetsu



    Village : Kirigakure
    Rank : Genin
    Clan : Hōzuki
    Discord Tag : Lithium#2476

    Yurei Clan Redux Empty Re: Yurei Clan Redux

    Post by Chigetsu Sun May 02, 2021 6:31 pm

    Kubi Tsuru wrote:
    Yurei Clan Redux Eye-logo-monogram-creative-design-mockup-black-and-white-simple-media-vector-id648452808?k=6&m=648452808&s=170667a&w=0&h=2YpWkoieP9YdRpfYzftHT1HgJj75QSH_ORnAaI2NRJU=

    Yurei
    Unaffiliated
    Dojutsu: Akayurei
    Clan Leader: Naito Yurei

    Clan History/Description Once upon a time, a long time ago, in the age of myth, the Yurei clan developed. Men and women of terrifyingly effective visual prowess, defying logic and sanity with scarily effective assassinations. Their visual abilities were so feared at this time, they were rumored to be able to read the very mind of the unfortunate soul that earned their ire. Soon, their reputation caught up with them, and they were driven out by those who feared them, eventually leaving Lightning Country altogether. They wouldn’t return for many, many years.

    Over time, they lost much, but most of all they lost the size they once had. Once, they rivaled the most numerous clan, but as they wandered and intermarried, the Yurei began to dwindle, eventually only a few dozen remaining. Their power dwindled as well, their knowledge and most powerful techniques being but a mystery. Though they still remain quite the powerful force to be reckoned with, much of their glory has faded into ruin.

    Now leaderless, they wander the outskirts of many countries but belonging to none.

    Clan/Bloodline Traits & Characteristics: Several things bind the few members of the Yurei together, that mark them as part of this distinctive clan. The most notable, perhaps, are the discolorations of their eyes and hair. Unlike most of their kin tend to be, the Yurei possess bright violet eyes, so much so that they tend to almost glow in the dark. Their hair, as well, tends towards violet colors, though unlike the unchanging shade of their eyes, can vary between light shades of lavender to purples so dark they’re almost black. All pure-blooded Yurei possess these traits, while those mixed with other bloodlines possess at least one. It has become somewhat of a calling card among the family, how others among the clan know each other at a distance.

    In addition to the violet colorations, the Yurei clan possess a petite, seemingly sickly frame. Pale of skin and small of stature, they are oft mistaken for someone stricken with a deathly illness. Despite this apparent weakness, however, they possess no such faults.

    Bloodline Description & Abilities: In myth, the yurei are ruined souls, rent from their body to never see nirvana; departed and corrupted spirits to which physical boundaries mean very little. It is unclear if the Yurei clan or this myth developed first, but regardless of the origin, it is an apt theme. The abilities of the Yurei mimic the mythological creature they’re named after, their supernatural ability to peer through space, heedless of any barriers in the way, glowing red eyes burning with emotion. As their Dojutsu develops and their skill with it advances, the Yurei can cast powerful Genjutsu, see the chakra flow of all living things, project their full senses forward, and even determine if a person is close to death. Despite its ancient bloodline, the dangerous occupation of the Yurei oft means the ninja  rarely have time to develop it. The potential power of this bloodline is still undiscovered.

    Akayusei: Stage One: 500 EXP
    lit. Red Ghost
    The first stage of this Dojutsu, there are several benefits to the Akayusei at this level, even though it has not yet achieved its full potential. First and foremost, the Yurei gains the ability to passively see the chakra levels of individuals he or she looks at. While the method this is done varies between Clan members, it is typically an aura around the individual, with a larger aura indicating a more powerful aura. At this level, the Yurei cannot determine exact levels of chakra. The eyes of the Yurei are also extremely analytical. While Akayurei Stage One is active, the Yurei Clan member gets a passive “+” to Perception, while also gaining the ability to use ”Yurei Shiryoku”.

    While activated, the Yurei possess glowing, bright red eyes, replacing the color of their pupil and iris. While typically a soft glow, at times of intense emotions, it can glow to reflect those, growing brighter or even leaving a flame-like trail. While activated, the Yurei clan member loses “.5 CP” per post.

    Akayurei: Stage Two: 500 EXP
    The penultimate advancement for this Dojutsu, and the stage at which most Yurei achieve sometime in their life. Training and experience has improved their sensory abilities quite a bit. The Yurei can now pinpoint exact levels of Chakra in living things they can see, an instinctive knowledge that is achieved simply by looking at an individual. Their analytical abilities have greatly increased as well. Simply by looking at a group, be it people, a pile of money, or trees in a forest, the Yurei will gain instinctive knowledge of the amount of objects within said groups; even with numerous groups of various types, the Yurei does not become overwhelmed by the information. Additionally, the Yurei Clan member gains a passive “++” to Perception. They gain access to a wider range of their clan abilities; “Akai Hekikai Technique”,”Chakura Yurei”,  and “Yurei Shiryoku: Sakasame Ni”.

    The red in the eyes is more pronounced now, even glowing red. Its almost a liquid, viscous form, roiling and pitching with the emotion of the member. When activated, the Yurei clan member loses. “.5 CP’ per post.

    Akayurei Zentai 500 EXP
    lit. Red Ghost Ultimate
    The final stage for any Yurei to achieve, the ultimate ability for any member of the Clan. Their training, their experience, and ultimately, their experiences have culminated to activate Akayurei Zentai. Yurei with this level of Dojustu have the passive ability to see the exact amount of life any individual may have, determined by a red aura around the individual. Their sensory abilities are so enhanced that, by this point, the Yurei can detect subtle changes in an individuals chakra flow and body features to determine even small things, such as lying or movements; some akin this to mind-reading. In terms of precognition, and determining movements, lies, or an opponent's jutsu, the Yurei with Akayurei Zentai is considered to have 1 tier higher in Intelligence. Their analytical abilities are increased astronomically as well, gaining a 1 tier boost to Perception that replaces previous boosts. Finally, the Yurei can learn the ultimate Jutsu of their clan; “Yurei Shiryoku: Zettai Kankaku”.

    The red is much more pronounced than the first two levels, filling their entire iris and covering their vision with a red, heatless flame.This flame is purely aesthetic and can take on many forms, from a streak of red across their eyes to a circular disc, to even appearing like make-up covering the eyelids. While activated, the Yurei clan member loses “1 CP” per post.

    Bloodline Limits & Drawbacks: Like all Dojutsu, the Akayurei possesses its fair share of weaknesses. In addition to the specific weaknesses that the jutsus bring, the eye itself has faults as well. The jutsu themselves, unless otherwise stated, can only be used one at a time. Additionally, most of the Jutsu require concentration that can be interrupted by taking damage or other things that can cause damage. Akayurei Jutsu and abilities affect allies and enemies alike.

    Clan Techniques
    Yurei Shiryoku:

    Akai Hekikai:

    Chakura Yurei:
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