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    Azuma's Custom Techniques

    Azuma Asakaze
    Azuma Asakaze



    Village : Sunagakure
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    Post by Azuma Asakaze Sun Mar 29, 2020 12:40 am

    ---Physical Fighting Styles
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    ---Auras
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    --Jutsu
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    Azuma Asakaze
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    Post by Azuma Asakaze Sun Mar 29, 2020 12:51 am

    All approved in original thread.
    Chigetsu
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    Post by Chigetsu Sun Mar 29, 2020 12:52 am

    Azuma Asakaze wrote:---Physical Fighting Styles
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    ---Auras
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    --Jutsu
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    Approved
    Azuma Asakaze
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    Post by Azuma Asakaze Wed Apr 08, 2020 4:39 am

    Azuma lost 1 S rank and 2 C rank Bukijutsu Techniques in character Reset. Apping replacements and new techniques. Two are re-works of the lost jutsu to fit with new skills and other differences in function, three are just new.

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    Ryuko
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    Post by Ryuko Thu Apr 09, 2020 5:01 am

    Azuma Asakaze wrote:Azuma lost 1 S rank and 2 C rank Bukijutsu Techniques in character Reset. Apping replacements and new techniques. Two are re-works of the lost jutsu to fit with new skills and other differences in function, three are just new.

    Physical Styles:

    Approved


    Auras:

    I don't know why it's registered as a Ken-Ninjtusu when this tech has absolutely nothing to do with swords.   At the very least it needs Hand signs and some kind of minor weakness like being short circuited if hit by water as an example

    Jutsu:

    I feel like this would trump Body Flicker in nearly any conceivable situation for having full mobility with the boost at the same cost. Either lower the boost by one plus  for each level for said versatility, or up the rank and activation cost to 5/10

    Since it's not an aura it also needs a defined range for how long the speed boost last before being cast again

    Name: Kowasu Nami ('Breaking Wave')
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: N/A
    Range: 50m
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Open
    Requirements: N/A
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: A very simple technique in theory, but hard to perform. The user lunges forth with a burst of speed, able to cover the distance between themselves and the target, before using the built up momentum to perform a powerful strike. The User gains 1 tier to their speed for the purpose of rushing at their target, then uses the momentum from the extra speed to strengthen their strike by 1 tier of strength in power.
    Weaknesses: N/A

    This is a bit too strong for a C-rank tech as it has 2 full tiers worth of stat boosts.   It should basically be two split separate jutsu.  

    I would advise using Lightning Step at the speed part making it a parent jutsu to this which would focus solely on the strength part. In return you can lower the Activation cost to 3 because being a Kenjutsu it's a physical attack which requires less energy to preform. You should also mention requiring a sword to preform as a weakness being a Kenjutsu and all.

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