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    Post by Okane Sat Mar 28, 2020 6:05 pm

    Armor:



    Weapons:



    Chemistry:



    Engineering:






    Materials:




    Constructs:


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    Post by Okane Sat Mar 28, 2020 6:06 pm

    Name: Multi-directional boost system (9,000 ryo)
    Item Rank: A
    Material Rank: B++
    Materials Used: 3 units of titanium, One battery, 2 Aluminium Pressurized Canister
    Description: This is a belt strapped tightly to the waist and lower back of the user. On each hip is a launcher that launches using 1 unit of gas per side used and retracts using the battery. The wires launch at B rank speed and stick into whatever solid surface they hit. A range of 50 meters per wire. When the wire retracts it pulls the person attached to it at A rank speeds. Yanking them in the direction they aimed. After 20 uses per wire fired the aluminium pressurized canisters have to be switched out. Takes a full post to do so. The controls are designed like sword handles with triggers on the handles to control firing by pulling and retracting by releasing. Has a slot in each controller (One for each hand) that allows a weapon handle to be fixed into it. So the item can be used while wielding a one handed weapon. Requires C rank coordination and C rank perception to use.  The titanium tether lines have A rank piercing power and release their grip with a double tap of the trigger.
    Requirement: Engineering
    Crafting Time: 7 days (3 days for Okane)
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    Post by Luna Yamamoto Sat Mar 28, 2020 11:53 pm

    Okane wrote:Name: Multi-directional boost system (9,000 ryo)
    Item Rank: A
    Material Rank: B++
    Materials Used: 3 units of titanium, One battery, 2 Aluminium Pressurized Canister
    Description: This is a belt strapped tightly to the waist and lower back of the user. On each hip is a launcher that launches using 1 unit of gas per side used and retracts using the battery. The wires launch at B rank speed and stick into whatever solid surface they hit. A range of 50 meters per wire. When the wire retracts it pulls the person attached to it at A rank speeds. Yanking them in the direction they aimed. After 20 uses per wire fired the aluminium pressurized canisters have to be switched out. Takes a full post to do so. The controls are designed like sword handles with triggers on the handles to control firing by pulling and retracting by releasing. Has a slot in each controller (One for each hand) that allows a weapon handle to be fixed into it. So the item can be used while wielding a one handed weapon. Requires C rank coordination and C rank perception to use.  The titanium tether lines have A rank piercing power and release their grip with a double tap of the trigger.
    Requirement: Engineering
    Crafting Time: 7 days (3 days for Okane)

    I'm assuming the wires and piercing bit are all titanium. If so, increase the titanium to 8. Fifteen feet of a sturdy cable will be 1 unit.
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    Post by Luna Yamamoto Wed Apr 01, 2020 7:28 am


    Name: Sticky Motion Mines (3,050 ryo)
    Item Rank: A
    Material Rank: D
    Materials Used: 1 unit of copper, 1 transducer, 1 unit of petroleum oil.
    Description: This item is a small disk with a red button on the top. When thrown the small disk that fits in the palm of ones hand will stick to any solid surface and once stuck will activate. If anything moves within five meters of it it sets off the transducer and fills the five meters with a burst of Fire dealing A rank damage in five meters for one post. This is a one time use item.
    Requirement: Engineering
    Crafting Time: 7 days (3 days for Okane)

    Unapproved.

    The damage dealt is dependent on the fuel used. Because this trap uses standard petroleum oil, it can do a maximum of C-rank damage. You would need to seek a Chemist for a new fuel source to deal higher damage.


    Name: Infrared capable goggle. (5,350)
    Item Rank: A
    Material Rank: D
    Materials Used: Copper 1 unit, leather 1 unit, 1 unit of glass, 1 battery
    Description: This item is a leather headband with one goggle that goes over either eye. It has two settings with a battery built into it. The first setting is a simple zoom in and zoom out up to a hundred meters with normal vision. However a second lens has been modified that can be dropped down to provide infrared vision. Allowing the user to zoom in and out up to a hundred meters and choose between normal and infrared.
    Requirement: Engineering
    Crafting Time: 7 days (3 days for Okane)

    Unapproved.

    Something as incredibly advanced as Infrared should be an S-rank item. With that being said, because this is an electronic it should run off charges with batteries being the supply source.

    My suggestion is: 100 charges per battery. Standard zoom-in function costs 1 charge per round. Infrared function costs 5 charges per round.

    Lastly, I feel the zoom function can be greatly improved in this circumstance. Feel free to include multiple zoom settings, with them being 100 meters, 250 meters, 500 meters, 750 meters, and 1,000 meters, or anything else you prefer.


    Name: Dune Glass
    Item Rank: S
    Material Rank: S+
    Price: 100,000 for 2 units
    Form: Solid
    Application: Must collect twenty pounds of sand from the Miracle Oasis as well as ten gallons of its water. The sand must be smelted for twenty four hours into glass, then mixed with a melted unit of Jade and then cooled in the water for another 24 hours before it can be shaped.
    Description: A nearly transparent slight green glass as solid as some of the strongest material.
    Effects: Any item made of this material is extremely difficult to perceive. Causing a negative 2 tiers to perception to see the object.
    Quantity: 2 units

    Unapproved.

    Crafting Material cannot provide stat benefits/debuffs. Only Weapon, Armor, or Engineering can provide stat buffs, and not debuffs. Note that these stat buffs are incredibly situational and must have logic tied to them.
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    Post by Okane Fri Apr 03, 2020 4:04 pm

    Name: Air ship
    Item Rank: A
    Material Rank: B+
    Materials Used: 100 units of steel (50,000) , 100 units of wood (10,000 ryo) , 10 units of Polymer (5,000 ryo), 2 Dragoon Batteries (33,000), 4 units of petroleum (full tank - 2,000 ryo) Total cost to make it = 100,000
    Description:
    Spoiler:

    This Airship is a mobile flying fortress. This can hold a crew of up to fifty people (including npc) and flies up to a mile above the ground below it. The ship uses hot air balloon systems kept within the ship itself for protection to increase and decrease it's height. A pair of twin turbines at the back alone the bottom allow it to move forward, backward and adjust it's direction. The Ship moves up to B rank speed but is mostly to cut down on travel time. Reduces travel time by 50%. Uses a half unit of petroleum per minor country it passes through and a full unit of petroleum per major nation it goes through. Has to set down to refuel. Refuel process adds one hour.
    Requirement: Engineering
    Crafting Time: 7 days (3 days for Okane)


    Name: Dragoon Battery
    Item Rank: A
    Material Rank: A
    Materials Used: Requires 2 units of Jade ( 6,000 ryo) 1 unit of copper wiring (500 ryo) and two Batteries (10,000 ryo) Total = 16,500 ryo
    Description: A Dragoon battery is a higher tier more self sustaining power system than a normal battery. It requires two battery cores pulled from normal batteries to be engineered into a jade core that constantly recharges itself. Creating a power source several times more powerful than a battery. Once finished the dragoon battery will keep anything it's attached to powered for far longer. But if the item it is attached to has a limited amount of charges, once depleted the dragoon battery takes 24 hours to recharge and can not be used during that time.
    Crafting Time: 7 days (3 days for Okane)


    Name: Dune Glass
    Item Rank: S
    Material Rank: S+
    Price: 50,000 for 2 units
    Form: Solid
    Application: Must collect twenty pounds of sand from the Miracle Oasis as well as ten gallons of its water. The sand must be smelted for twenty four hours into glass, then mixed with a melted unit of Jade and then cooled in the water for another 24 hours before it can be shaped.
    Description: A nearly transparent slight green glass as solid as some of the strongest material.
    Effects: Glass is extremely durable and lightweight. Increases the range of projectiles by 50 meters
    Quantity: 2 units



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    Post by Chigetsu Fri Apr 03, 2020 6:29 pm

    Okane wrote:Name: Sticky Motion Mines (4,550 ryo)
    Item Rank: A
    Material Rank: D
    Materials Used: 1 unit of copper, 1 transducer, 1 unit of Prometheus Oil.
    Description: This item is a small disk with a red button on the top. When thrown the small disk that fits in the palm of ones hand will stick to any solid surface and once stuck will activate. If anything moves within five meters of it it sets off the transducer and fills the five meters with a burst of Fire dealing A rank damage in five meters for one post. This is a one time use item.
    Requirement: Engineering
    Crafting Time: 7 days (3 days for Okane)



    Name: zoom capable goggle. (5,350)
    Item Rank: A
    Material Rank: D
    Materials Used: Copper 1 unit, leather 1 unit, 1 unit of glass, 1 battery
    Description: This item is a leather headband with one goggle that goes over either eye. This item has 100 charges per battery. Once it is out a new battery will have to be purchased for it. The goggle has multiple zoom settings, with them being 100 meters, 250 meters, 500 meters, 750 meters, and 1,000 meters,
    Requirement: Engineering
    Crafting Time: 7 days (3 days for Okane)






    Name: Dune Glass
    Item Rank: S
    Material Rank: S+
    Price: 50,000 for 2 units
    Form: Solid
    Application: Must collect twenty pounds of sand from the Miracle Oasis as well as ten gallons of its water. The sand must be smelted for twenty four hours into glass, then mixed with a melted unit of Jade and then cooled in the water for another 24 hours before it can be shaped.
    Description: A nearly transparent slight green glass as solid as some of the strongest material.
    Effects: Any item made of this material is extremely difficult to perceive. One must have a perception stat matching the speed of the projectile to actually see it.
    Quantity: 2 units

    Name: Multi-directional boost system (14,000 ryo)
    Item Rank: A
    Material Rank: B++
    Materials Used: 8 units of titanium, One battery, 2 Aluminium Pressurized Canister
    Description: This is a belt strapped tightly to the waist and lower back of the user. On each hip is a launcher that launches using 1 unit of gas per side used and retracts using the battery. The wires launch at B rank speed and stick into whatever solid surface they hit. A range of 50 meters per wire. When the wire retracts it pulls the person attached to it at A rank speeds. Yanking them in the direction they aimed. After 20 uses per wire fired the aluminium pressurized canisters have to be switched out. Takes a full post to do so. The controls are designed like sword handles with triggers on the handles to control firing by pulling and retracting by releasing. Has a slot in each controller (One for each hand) that allows a weapon handle to be fixed into it. So the item can be used while wielding a one handed weapon. Requires C rank coordination and C rank perception to use.  The titanium tether lines have A rank piercing power and release their grip with a double tap of the trigger.
    Requirement: Engineering
    Crafting Time: 7 days (3 days for Okane)

    Name: Prometheus Oil (2,000 ryo)
    Item Rank: N/A
    Material Rank: A
    Materials Used: 4 units of petroleum oil, 1 chemistry station
    Description: 4 units of Petroleum are chemically treated with a chemistry station to create one unit of Prometheus oil. Prometheus Oil burns hotter and longer than Petroleum. It burns at A rank damage and lasts one hour. Can be put out when diluted with any non flammable liquid. Can also be put out when smothered.
    Crafting Time: 0

    "One must have a perception stat matching the speed of the projectile to actually see it." - This must be removed. Materials cannot reference stats, this is the job of the crafted items to interact with stats

    The rest is approved
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    Post by Okane Mon Apr 06, 2020 8:21 pm

    Name: Air ship
    Item Rank: A
    Material Rank: B+
    Materials Used: 100 units of steel (50,000) , 100 units of wood (10,000 ryo) , 10 units of Polymer (5,000 ryo), 2 Dragoon Batteries (33,000), 4 units of petroleum (full tank - 2,000 ryo) Total cost to make it = 100,000
    Description:
    Spoiler:

    This Airship is a mobile flying fortress. This can hold a crew of up to fifty people (including npc) and flies up to a mile above the ground below it. The ship uses hot air balloon systems kept within the ship itself for protection to increase and decrease it's height. A pair of twin turbines at the back alone the bottom allow it to move forward, backward and adjust it's direction. The Ship moves up to B rank speed but is mostly to cut down on travel time. Reduces travel time by 50%. Uses a half unit of petroleum per minor country it passes through and a full unit of petroleum per major nation it goes through. Has to set down to refuel. Refuel process adds one hour.
    Requirement: Engineering
    Crafting Time: 7 days (3 days for Okane)


    Name: Dragoon Battery
    Item Rank: A
    Material Rank: A
    Materials Used: Requires 2 units of Jade ( 6,000 ryo) 1 unit of copper wiring (500 ryo) and two Batteries (10,000 ryo) Total = 16,500 ryo
    Description: A Dragoon battery is a higher tier more self sustaining power system than a normal battery. It requires two battery cores pulled from normal batteries to be engineered into a jade core that constantly recharges itself. Creating a power source several times more powerful than a battery. Once finished the dragoon battery will keep anything it's attached to powered for far longer. But if the item it is attached to has a limited amount of charges, once depleted the dragoon battery takes 24 hours to recharge and can not be used during that time.
    Crafting Time: 7 days (3 days for Okane)


    Name: Dune Glass
    Item Rank: S
    Material Rank: S+
    Price: 50,000 for 2 units
    Form: Solid
    Application: Must collect twenty pounds of sand from the Miracle Oasis as well as ten gallons of its water. The sand must be smelted for twenty four hours into glass, then mixed with a melted unit of Jade and then cooled in the water for another 24 hours before it can be shaped.
    Description: A nearly transparent slight green glass as solid as some of the strongest material.
    Effects: Glass is extremely durable and lightweight. Increases the range of projectiles by 50 meters
    Quantity: 2 units
    Crafting Time: 0
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    Post by Luna Yamamoto Mon Apr 06, 2020 8:38 pm

    Okane wrote:Name: Air ship
    Item Rank: A
    Material Rank: B+
    Materials Used: 100 units of steel (50,000) , 100 units of wood (10,000 ryo) , 10 units of Polymer (5,000 ryo), 2 Dragoon Batteries (33,000), 4 units of petroleum (full tank - 2,000 ryo) Total cost to make it = 100,000
    Description:
    Spoiler:

    This Airship is a mobile flying fortress. This can hold a crew of up to fifty people (including npc) and flies up to a mile above the ground below it. The ship uses hot air balloon systems kept within the ship itself for protection to increase and decrease it's height. A pair of twin turbines at the back alone the bottom allow it to move forward, backward and adjust it's direction. The Ship moves up to B rank speed but is mostly to cut down on travel time. Reduces travel time by 50%. Uses a half unit of petroleum per minor country it passes through and a full unit of petroleum per major nation it goes through. Has to set down to refuel. Refuel process adds one hour.
    Requirement: Engineering
    Crafting Time: 7 days (3 days for Okane)

    I would suggest peeping the War System to see how ships/war machinery works. I feel this would not only vastly improve the air ship concept, but it will also help with travel time, pricing, and the like.



    Name: Dragoon Battery
    Item Rank: A
    Material Rank: A
    Materials Used: Requires 2 units of Jade ( 6,000 ryo) 1 unit of copper wiring (500 ryo) and two Batteries (10,000 ryo) Total = 16,500 ryo
    Description: A Dragoon battery is a higher tier more self sustaining power system than a normal battery. It requires two battery cores pulled from normal batteries to be engineered into a jade core that constantly recharges itself. Creating a power source several times more powerful than a battery. Once finished the dragoon battery will keep anything it's attached to powered for far longer. But if the item it is attached to has a limited amount of charges, once depleted the dragoon battery takes 24 hours to recharge and can not be used during that time.
    Crafting Time: 7 days (3 days for Okane)

    Approved


    Name: Dune Glass
    Item Rank: S
    Material Rank: S+
    Price: 50,000 for 2 units
    Form: Solid
    Application: Must collect twenty pounds of sand from the Miracle Oasis as well as ten gallons of its water. The sand must be smelted for twenty four hours into glass, then mixed with a melted unit of Jade and then cooled in the water for another 24 hours before it can be shaped.
    Description: A nearly transparent slight green glass as solid as some of the strongest material.
    Effects: Glass is extremely durable and lightweight. Increases the range of projectiles by 50 meters
    Quantity: 2 units
    Crafting Time: 0

    Assuming this increases the range by 50 meters before it starts to slow do as per projectile rules, approved.
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    Post by Okane Mon Apr 06, 2020 9:25 pm

    Name: Skyhawk Trade Airship
    Item Rank: A
    Material Rank: B+
    Materials Used: 500,000 ryo
    Description:
    SkyHawk:
    Requirement: Engineering
    Crafting Time: 10 days


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    Post by Luna Yamamoto Tue Apr 07, 2020 5:46 am

    Okane wrote:Name: Skyhawk Trade Airship
    Item Rank: A
    Material Rank: B+
    Materials Used: 100 units of steel (50,000) , 100 units of wood (10,000 ryo) , 10 units of Polymer (5,000 ryo), 2 Dragoon Batteries (33,000), 4 units of petroleum (full tank - 2,000 ryo) Total cost to make it = 100,000
    Description:
    SkyHawk:
    Requirement: Engineering
    Crafting Time: 7 days (3 days for Okane)

    So from what I can tell from this is you plan for this airship to solely be for transportation and trading. This is similar to the East Indiaman Trade ship currently on the market for 700,000 ryo and a 40,000 ryo monthly upkeep. The primary difference I see between the two being the Airship is slightly faster and makes resources slightly more valuable by increasing its value by 25%. So here is the advice I have to offer:


    • Price: For structures (if you ever get around to making custom buildings) or transportation you are not required to give guesstimations for what you plan to build. Due to how much goes into considerations there is simply too much to keep track of. But from what I'm seeing right now, you can construct your Airship for roughly 500,000 ryo. So feel free to erase the material calculations and replace it with 500,000 ryo. In addition to this new price, consider increasing the upkeep to 60,000 ryo per month.

    • Resource Value: This ship should not function too far from the market version given its rank. Now, all things considered, the way it functions and the price sucks a lot of its effectiveness out. But I will still say an A-rank Air Trade Ship could yield +100% to a resource. So a 100,000 ryo trade route will now become 200,000 ryo. This will of course follow the same limitations as the East Indiaman does.

    • Building Time: This must be per ship. In the spoiler it still says "Building time: 10 days (up to 5 at the same time)"
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    Post by Luna Yamamoto Tue Apr 07, 2020 7:02 am

    Okane wrote:Name: Skyhawk Trade Airship
    Item Rank: A
    Material Rank: B+
    Materials Used: 500,000 ryo
    Description:
    SkyHawk:
    Requirement: Engineering
    Crafting Time: 10 days

    Approved.
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    Post by Okane Fri Apr 24, 2020 11:40 am

    Name: Tamahagane (precious Jewel
    Item Rank: S
    Material Rank: S+
    Price: 10,000 per unit
    Form: Solid
    Application: Two units of steel and one unit of Jade is melted down into one another and then chemically treated before being placed into the crucible and folded a hundred times.
    Description: A heavy steel that is more durable by far. Used to make swords and knives usually.
    Effects: After being folded a hundred times all three units form into one heavy steel with a green tint. Anyone swinging with a weapon made from one of these increases the damage of only the weapon by one strength tier. Can not lift this ultra heavy weapon with anything less than C rank strength. If using C rank strength reduce coordination by a +. If using B rank strength or higher no drawback.
    Quantity: 1 units
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    Post by Chigetsu Fri May 15, 2020 7:26 pm

    Okane wrote:Name: Tamahagane (precious Jewel
    Item Rank: S
    Material Rank: S+
    Price: 10,000 per unit
    Form: Solid
    Application: Two units of steel and one unit of Jade is melted down into one another and then chemically treated before being placed into the crucible and folded a hundred times.
    Description: A heavy steel that is more durable by far. Used to make swords and knives usually.
    Effects: After being folded a hundred times all three units form into one heavy steel with a green tint. Anyone swinging with a weapon made from one of these increases the damage of only the weapon by one strength tier. Can not lift this ultra heavy weapon with anything less than C rank strength. If using C rank strength reduce coordination by a +. If using B rank strength or higher no drawback.
    Quantity: 1 units

    Stuff that would boost the damage like what this is trying to do would have to be in the crafted item, not in the material

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